I second the opinion on your texts. They’re quite good.
Are we free to use them in our songs if we upload them here for you to hear?
I’m also writing my opinion in this thread because I wrote a song my self once, titled Life 😁
One of my first songs:
Life
Waiting for the sun to return
In to my life where the darkness lives
Waiting for the time to begin
To heal all the wounds that we just can’t hide
Looking for a reason to leave you babe
I can’t seem to find
Life, is right here with you
Life, is like me and you.
Watching as the sun start to rise
Sending light in pushing out the dark
Watching as your face turn to smile
Happiness is all I can find in your eyes
Looking for a reason to want you more
I'm not hard to find
Life, is right here with you
Life, is like me and you.
Sounds like this. Not finished or anything. Abrupt ending.
I made it on GarageBand for iPad 😁