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[SchwarznoldArzenegger]

Hey guys,

I think I need a bit feedback on something I've made 2 weeks ago. 

https://soundcloud.com/user-82567853/mountains

I would love to hear your opinion on that :)

 

Thank you for your time :)

[-Johan-]

 

Hi Schwarznold.

I like the intro, very atmospheric and moody. The melody is good, but maybe you should soften it a little?  Play some notes a little softer, also I think you should consider to introduce it a little slower – automate the volume.  

I think the drops volume should be lowered a bit in relation to the intro, I understand what you are aiming for, but it just gets a little bit too loud in a none pleasing way. I also think the part before breakdown should be longer, and I miss some rhythmic drums to the beat.

Also some more drums in the second part of the track.   

 

The most important thing for me however, is that you even out the volume between the different parts. For me this is an absolute necessity.

Other then that I am nitpicking, and everything is of course only in my opinion so take it for what it is. The overall atmosphere and feeling is definitely there, so don’t take my criticism the wrong way.

Redigerat 18 januari 2019 av -Johan-

[SchwarznoldArzenegger]

Thank you for your answer, it helped me a lot 😄 

I'm already working on something new and I'm trying to make it better ... I think it already is 😄 

 

Many thanks for taking your time, this made me happy 🙂

[-Johan-]

You're welcome. Please post back your progress when ready :)

Redigerat 19 januari 2019 av -Johan-

[HomerJSimpsson]

To me, the instrument of beat does't  go well with the others. Nice piece otherwise.

[-Johan-]

I agree about that sidechained pad if thats what you meen Homie, but maybe its just that its way too loud and takes over completely...