Robin,
I'm a little bit lost here.. so please help me out.
You post new threads with lyrics but you don't want any feedback - why? Is it just to show off or what's the purpose? This community here is excellent if you want to evolve and become better as a musician, a songwriter or a producer. However, you seem to have a different agenda which, for me at least, is fine - just communicate it better so that you can get the response you want.
Best regards,
Robby