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  1. Well not anymore , ive uploaded 2 short songs that i made with the Music maker program. But since i have so much other things going on that take my time ( painting, writing on a book,my own company)i cant focus on music. If i do something i want to do it good and since i love music and doesnt want to give it up i make lyrics. Its quick and gives me a chance to exercise my fantasy and brain.

  2. No feedback is needed. Its more of a "i have a melody and this text fits in my song" type of thing.

    I dont have time to produce music so please feel free to use my lyrics but i would very much like to hear the result so please upload it here if you do it.

    Thank you !

     

    The mighty eagle

    I saw it on the news today.
    Countries are at war.
    Missiles launched and people's in dispair.
    Powerhungry men in suits play  game.
    You and me we end up maimed ! Its always the same.


    Why does men in suits dictate
    Ordinary peoples fate ?
    Why did truth and logic loose its luster
    Can it be because the world has gone insane neatly tied on to chain.
    A chain made from moral disdain.



    And the war is raging on
    We never hear the stories of those who left their homes.
    All heroes , men in suits bang on their chests.
    Behind the curtain , contracts , oil and riches rests.


    Why does men in suits dictate
    Ordinary peoples fate ?
    Why did truth and logic loose its luster
    Can it be because the world has gone insane neatly tied on to chain.
    A chain made from moral disdain.



    And when the war comes to an end.
    The eagle leave its prey bloodied on the bed.
    Its people ohh people paying with their lives.
    Its people ohh people paying with their lives.
    Recources! Siphoned and the eagle thrives.

     

    If you have any questions please contact me.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin H.


  3. I am in no need of feedbacks. Its more of a "i have a melody and these lyrics fit my melody type of thing"

     

    Claustrophobia

     

    The locks are bolted, im inside
    This box of wood there is no light.
    Darkness all around myself.
    There is nobody here to help.
    The world around me is caving in
    Claus-tro-pho-bia begin.

    I am trapped within these walls
    Magicians helper . Damn them all!
    Pulse is rising.
    End is near.
    Fear and panic , hell is here!


    I try to scream but mouth is dry.
    My hands are slipping and i cry.
    "Help me please" im thinking now
    I try to get out but i dont know how.

    I am trapped within these walls
    Magicians helper . Damn them all!
    Pulse is rising.
    End is near.
    Fear and panic , hell is here!


    Suddenly i see a light
    I feel a hand i start to bite
    People cheering and i see
    Magician staring down on me.

     

    If you have any questions

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin H.

  4. Hello Osiris , no its not strange at all . I dont have as much time as i want to put into the music. 

    I write texts because i find it interesting and a fun play with words and to stretch my fantasy. 

    Today i was an inmate in San quentin... 

    I have no intention of going pro in the music world since i simply dont have the time and  since i dont have the time i sometimes find it irritating when people gives feedback like "you didnt spell this correctly , you must have a story , dont rhyme like that.... "  i seriously doesnt think there is any right or wrong when it comes to making texts because i have seen soooo many songs with texts that doesnt have a shit to do with a story that makes top 10 and songs that make it just because they are catchy and irritating.

    I do this mostly because i enjoy making texts, rhymes and using my imagination. Writing lyrics about places i have never been or lives i have never lived.

    And if i can do something that will make someone else complete their song i think it is good ?

    Thats why i write "if you have the melody and my text fit the song...."

    Best regards from Robin H.

    • Gilla 1
  5. I am in no need of feedbacks. Its more of a "i have a melody and these lyrics fit my melody type of thing"

     

    I did my time


    It was cold when i walked on through the gates.
    I had been told "its harder in the states"
    I had been told "you did a crime, but dont do no elses time"
    "Just mind your own and soon you'll be home"

    Ohh San quentin is a beast
    Makes grown men cry
    No its no feast
    I did my time.
    i came out.
    i survived.


    Out on the yard i heard him call my name.
    "Shotcaller" called on me but i never came.
    They made a shank and it had my name.
    They start to come, for this im not to blame.

    Ohh San quentin is a beast
    Makes grown men cry
    No its no feast
    I did my time.
    i came out.
    i survived.


    The years went by and lord know that they tried.
    To take my life , defiance has its price.
    All i did was mind my own, i have now reaped what i have sown.
    I pay the price for the gautlet that was thrown.

    Ohh San quentin is a beast
    Makes grown men cry
    No its no feast
    I did my time.
    i came out.
    i survived.


    My final day has come now i am old.
    I did it all , i did as i was told.
    I did a crime i did my time
    And theres no coming back for me.
    No count me out, now that i am free.




    If you have any questions please contact me.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com 

    Best regards from Robin H.

  6. I am in no need of feedbacks. Its more of a "i have a melody and these lyrics fit my melody type of thing"

     

    A box of crayons

    A box of crayons spilling out i feel the same.
    Some days are blue and it is hard to spell my name.
    Sometimes its yellow and the sun is out.
    Im feeling fine and i have no doubt.

    I keep getting flashes of colors here.
    Sometimes the world is not so clear.
    Like a box of crayons i see the world.
    In all the colors it is twirled.


    The color green it makes me warm. thinking of the trees in all its forms.
    Red is the color that i like best.
    Because its love and it beats the rest.

    I keep getting flashes of colors here.
    Sometimes the world is not so clear.
    Like a box of crayons i see the world.
    In all the colors it is twirled.


    I dont like black cause it is dark.
    It gives me chills, it doesnt have a spark.
    My life is like a mix of all, these colors here
    They paint my soul.
    I see them everywhere i go
    Sometimes they'r dull
    Sometimes they glow

    I keep getting flashes of colors here.
    Sometimes the world is not so clear.
    Like a box of crayons i see the world.
    In all the colors it is twirled.





     

    If you have any questions please contact me.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com 

    Best regards from Robin H.

    • Gilla 1
  7. Yes Osiris , what happens if you have the key to someones heart and turn it all around ? Try it ? You might like it 😃

    I dont really understand the obsession about stories ? Can you explain for me the story of the number one hit "Tutti frutti" by Little Richard ?

    All people have diffrent taste , i can love a song but doesnt have to know the language even ? But you must know the meaning and what the story is if you are going to like it as i understand it ? We are two diffrent person with diffrent tastes obviously and for me there does not have to be a story everytime in a song.

  8. 18 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

    so I could kepp the kids fed

    Whats kepp?

     

    19 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

    I really don't now what they do

    Now ? Or know maby ?

     

    21 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

    I don't reade notes and manuals I hate

    Reade or read the 

    I get confused when you keep coming back and tell me how bad my spelling is and you give me this ? 

    Anyway i write text and if someone make a melody / song and think that my text fit this melody / song just holler to me. I dont have much time to put into making it myself but texts keep popping up in my head so i share them.

    If its annoying to you just block me and continue with your songs.

    //Robin H.

  9. Turn the key around.

     

    Summer came and went away.
    Your my island and you stayed.
    In this ocean we call love.
    I heard you whisper on and off.

    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.
    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.


    We drifted around and round
    You and me . We where bound
    Where bound by our heart.
    Right there , right there from the start.

    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.
    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.


    I have you in my arms ill take you to my shore.
    Ill keep you safe from harm, ive never felt like this before.
    Two islands in a sea.
    Baby that is you and me.

    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.
    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.


    We are drifting side by side.
    Closer then ever , come the tide.
    You are my harbour in the storm
    You have a heart that is warm.

    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.
    Turn the key around turn it all around.
    The key to my heart turn it all around.


    I will always be right here.
    A rock to keep you out of fear.
    Together we are strong.
    Our love goes on and on and on.

     

    If you want to work with me just give me a holler.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com 

    Best regards from Robin H.

  10. Doc Holliday

     

    A lunger and a pistol , colt a 38
    His Riding down to Tombstone
    to gamble and to fight.
    He love to see their face when he shows the cards.
    A hand thats full of aces and he takes it all.


    Im a Dentist and a gambler
    Devils took my soul
    Im slinger and rambler
    One shot and your gone
    Im the fastest gunman in the west
    And i do the devils work.
    I put them six feet under.
    In a box under the dirt.



    Im deadly with my pistols cause i got nothing to lose.
    If your hand shake or you blink, your going home in a box of wood.
    The Clanton boys were blinkin when we met head on.
    The ferrymans now taking them to their new home.

    Im a Dentist and a gambler
    Devils took my soul
    Im slinger and rambler
    One shot and your gone
    Im the fastest gunman in the west
    And i do the devils work.
    I put them six feet under.
    In a box under the dirt.



    There was another slinger and he was mighty fast.
    His name was Johnny Ringo and his time has now past.
    He had to much to lose in a duel with a walking dead.
    His mind started playing tricks on him and now he is full led.


    Im a Dentist and a gambler
    Devils took my soul
    Im slinger and rambler
    One shot and your gone
    Im the fastest gunman in the west
    And i do the devils work.
    I put them six feet under.
    In a box under the dirt.



    There was no faster slinger to meet me in a duel.
    Ive done the devils bidding so now it is my turn.
    My lungs are giving up and its time for me to go.
    Time for me to meet my maker
    Time for me to pay my dues.

     

    Send me a mail if you want to work together on something.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin H.

     

  11. You came to me on wings of love

    :Male singer
    Our eyes they met , there was a silence and a click.
    You turned away , i wanted more.
    I started walking but you where gone.

    :Male singer
    You came to me on wings of love in my dream.
    We start to fly , we shared our lives, we shared our dreams.

    Female singer:
    Our eyes they met , there was a silence and a click.
    I turned away i was afraid, afraid of pain and broken heart.
    I left you there i walked away.

    :Female singer
    You came to me on wings of love in my dream.
    We start to fly , we shared our lives, we shared our dreams.

    :Male singer
    I search for you , i see your face when i close my eyes.
    And when i find you , ill take your hand
    I will ask your name and i will give you mine.

    :Female singer
    I think about you , i see your face when i close my eyes.
    And if we meet. I will give you a chance to touch my heart.
    Ill take your hand , i will ask your name and i will give you mine.

    2x
    :Together
    You came to me on wings of love and now i stand.
    Infront of you to share my life to share my dream.
    Give love a chance dont turn away dont walk away.
    Give love a chance dont turn away dont walk away.

     

    If you like my texts or have another project you think i can help with please contact me.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin Hansen.














  12. Lost without you

     

    I saw you face
    I saw your eyes
    The truth was there
    I saw no lies

    You walked away , out of my life
    You cut me deep , you turned the knife

    Can you tell me why you ripped my soul?
    Why you crushed my life , why my heart you stole?


    Dreams are shattered , pain is near.
    Im on my knees and your not here.
    Your words they rocked me to the core.
    Oh god im falling ! Please no more !

    Your smile was like a ray of light
    You brought the sun you destroyed the night.
    Your laughter like a silver bell , i was in heaven and now in hell.

    Can you tell me why you ripped my soul?
    Why you crushed my life , why my heart you stole?


    Im lost without you here alone.
    Ive tried to call you , you dont take the phone.
    Weeks have past but still i feel
    The pain is here and it is real

    I want you back yeah i need you here
    Its hard without you to fight this fear
    Cmon baby let us try again
    One last chance one last dance

     



    If you like my text or think i can help somehow on another project? Please let me know .

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin Hansen.

  13. Living the life

    Im on to something good !
    Yeah im on to something sweet!
    The feeling makes me fly ! It lifts me off my feet!

    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    I am the king yeah im number one!
    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    Lets hit the club yeah and have some fun!


    The night have started so here we go
    We gonna make these speakers start to glow!
    The beat is pumping the floor is hot
    My crew is here to show the club what they got.


    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    I am the king yeah im number one!
    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    Lets hit the club yeah and have some fun!



    Up on the bar , down by the floor
    V.I.P you name it ! We do it all!
    There is no limit
    There is no stop
    Crystal, jacks finished soon we close this shop!


    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    I am the king yeah im number one!
    Im living my dream here in the sun!
    Lets hit the club yeah and have some fun!


    When dawn is breaking we hit the beach
    We catch a tan and a drink for each
    We change our clothes and we fix the hair
    Were going again so be prepared.


    If you like my text or think i can help somehow on another project? Please let me know .

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin Hansen.



  14. Remember me this christmas .

    Snowflakes sailing thru the air and the cold is setting in.
    Above the city chimneytops there is christmas in the air.

    My memories leads back again to a time when i had all.
    A mothers care a fathers arms a place to call our home.

    The fever took you both from me and left me here alone.
    I wish i had a moment more to show how much ive grown.

    All i ever wanted was a family a home.
    All i ever needed was to feel that i belonged
    .

    Even if you are not here. Ill make you proud and this i swear.
    You made me good you made me strong.
    You tought me the difference between right and wrong.

    You will always be...
    The guiding light in the dark for me.
    You were always there showing me all i know and cared.

    All i ever wanted was a family a home.
    All i ever needed was to feel that i belonged.


    Now i make a wish of mine.
    I wish i could go back in time.
    I know it doesnt work that way.
    But all i can do is to hope and pray.
    I miss you mom and dad so much.
    One last hug.
    One last kiss.
    And one last touch.

     

    If you like my text or think i can help somehow on another project? Please let me know .

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin Hansen.

  15.  

    Broken heart and broken dream.

    Silence grips me when youre gone.
    Paralyzed i wait until the dawn.
    Open door and empty bed.
    The memory of you , it fills my head.

     

    Oh oh oh you left me here !
    Broken dreams and full of fear.
    Oh oh oh you took my heart , took it right there from the start!

     

    Mind is numb i feel so cold.
    Going thru the things you told.
    Words are burning like a flame.
    Life will never be the same.

     

    Oh oh oh you left me here!
    Broken dreams and full of fear.
    Oh oh oh you took my heart , took it right there from the start!

     

    Slowly time did mend my soul.
    And gave me back the heart you stole.
    Finally im free of you!
    You broke my heart and that is true !

     

    Oh oh oh you left me there!
    You left me there , you did not care.
    Oh oh oh im over you ! 
    Im over you and that is true!


    If you like my texts or think that i can help with new texts for a collaboration please contact me.

    Atrax51@hotmail.com

    Best regards from Robin H.

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