You...vill nån skriva nån rad min låt så uppskattas det.

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[HomerJSimpsson]

Påminner mig an nån anledning om Falco Jeanny/Coming home (länk nedan) och så klart Lo Reed Perfect Day. ... Will du ha feedback eller mer text ?

Tyvärr hör inte jag riktig texten innan, men ... lets have a go ...

I been there before 

and again, I said nevermore.

But as time goes on,

once more I'm singing that old song.

 

About remembering that day

when it all went away.        (alt. when you went away)

And left me there as before

bleeding from my hard core.

 

I didn't see it comeing,

I was blind runinng

around in my happy dream,

thinking we're a team.

 

Now it has happened again,

like I didn't remember back then.

When it was all good and new

and I happyly went all into.

 

I been there before 

and again, I said nevermore.

But as time goes on,

once more I'm singing that old song.

 

 

Redigerat 5 juni 2022 av HomerJSimpsson
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[Erik dP]

Falco är visserligen inte feltänkt. Bra grund med intressant röst. Själv tänkte jag att det påminner mer om nåt franskt, typ Serge Gainsbourg. Eller kanske Leonard Cohen.

 

Redigerat 6 juni 2022 av Erik dP

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Tack för konstruktiv kritik uppskattas :)