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Turn the key around.

 

Summer came and went away.
Your my island and you stayed.
In this ocean we call love.
I heard you whisper on and off.

Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.
Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.


We drifted around and round
You and me . We where bound
Where bound by our heart.
Right there , right there from the start.

Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.
Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.


I have you in my arms ill take you to my shore.
Ill keep you safe from harm, ive never felt like this before.
Two islands in a sea.
Baby that is you and me.

Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.
Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.


We are drifting side by side.
Closer then ever , come the tide.
You are my harbour in the storm
You have a heart that is warm.

Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.
Turn the key around turn it all around.
The key to my heart turn it all around.


I will always be right here.
A rock to keep you out of fear.
Together we are strong.
Our love goes on and on and on.

 

If you want to work with me just give me a holler.

Atrax51@hotmail.com 

Best regards from Robin H.

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There's a lot of around going around ...

whisper is on / whisper is off ... she has some kind of switch ? 😉

I think this needs rephrasing ...

Is it based on some melody ?

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Just so you know who's giving you kritik's ...

About me

Time's running out, gonna do one song.
with instruments, played wrong
but anyway, what was I'm gonna say
nevermind, the lyrics gonna suck anyway.

to much rime, wrong in time
sombody should stop my crime
against music and song
my voice couldn't sound more wrong.

well hi-tech gonna fix that,
I got low-tech, it's crap
cheap from the net,
so I could kepp the kids fed

Got me a guitar and a bass
and somthing made of brass,
a accordion and some flute
think it's broken, it goes 'tooot'.

Violins and piano for the kids of mine
They read notes now, they gonna be fine.
I don't reade notes and manuals I hate
so I gonna need a lot of help, mate ?

Got a looper and an UAC-2
I really don't now what they do
downloaded cakewalk for free
they all make a sound like a piss'doff bee.

a stereo from the 90 i have
and a lot of youtube save
old mixtapes and som LP's
if you old you know what that is.

How did I pay for all of this you wan-da ?
I drive a used 5grand SKO-DA.
So here I am, don't know whats gonna be
look's like time is a real enemy ...

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18 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

so I could kepp the kids fed

Whats kepp?

 

19 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

I really don't now what they do

Now ? Or know maby ?

 

21 minuter sedan sa HomerJSimpsson:

I don't reade notes and manuals I hate

Reade or read the 

I get confused when you keep coming back and tell me how bad my spelling is and you give me this ? 

Anyway i write text and if someone make a melody / song and think that my text fit this melody / song just holler to me. I dont have much time to put into making it myself but texts keep popping up in my head so i share them.

If its annoying to you just block me and continue with your songs.

//Robin H.

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As I said before, the guy giving you kritiks got his english from >>The Simpsons<< ... so Doh !

 

 

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I don't really see a story in your lyrics. To me it just seems like a bunch of sentences that, individually, sounds good has been put together. 

What are you trying to tell the listener/reader?

Why should one turn the key around - what happens then? 

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Yes Osiris , what happens if you have the key to someones heart and turn it all around ? Try it ? You might like it 😃

I dont really understand the obsession about stories ? Can you explain for me the story of the number one hit "Tutti frutti" by Little Richard ?

All people have diffrent taste , i can love a song but doesnt have to know the language even ? But you must know the meaning and what the story is if you are going to like it as i understand it ? We are two diffrent person with diffrent tastes obviously and for me there does not have to be a story everytime in a song.

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