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A lunger and a pistol , colt a 38
His Riding down to Tombstone
to gamble and to fight.
He love to see their face when he shows the cards.
A hand thats full of aces and he takes it all.


Im a Dentist and a gambler
Devils took my soul
Im slinger and rambler
One shot and your gone
Im the fastest gunman in the west
And i do the devils work.
I put them six feet under.
In a box under the dirt.



Im deadly with my pistols cause i got nothing to lose.
If your hand shake or you blink, your going home in a box of wood.
The Clanton boys were blinkin when we met head on.
The ferrymans now taking them to their new home.

Im a Dentist and a gambler
Devils took my soul
Im slinger and rambler
One shot and your gone
Im the fastest gunman in the west
And i do the devils work.
I put them six feet under.
In a box under the dirt.



There was another slinger and he was mighty fast.
His name was Johnny Ringo and his time has now past.
He had to much to lose in a duel with a walking dead.
His mind started playing tricks on him and now he is full led.


Im a Dentist and a gambler
Devils took my soul
Im slinger and rambler
One shot and your gone
Im the fastest gunman in the west
And i do the devils work.
I put them six feet under.
In a box under the dirt.



There was no faster slinger to meet me in a duel.
Ive done the devils bidding so now it is my turn.
My lungs are giving up and its time for me to go.
Time for me to meet my maker
Time for me to pay my dues.

 

Send me a mail if you want to work together on something.

Atrax51@hotmail.com

Best regards from Robin H.

 

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Now how would that sound if someone sang it ? And what  melody would it fit ?

Is it ment to be a poem ?  If so, what is its rythem to be spoken ?

The refrain, it has a rythem, not shure about the rest.

Somebody sing it and put it to the test.

There might be melody, may good for a rap.

Whatever, I don't think it's crap.

Think there'are som spellings wrong.

But, hey, that's not my song.

I never learnd english, got it all from TV Simps.

I can make it sound ok, but I spell like Chimps.

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Yes some spell misstakes , i was thinking a country song maby.

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I got stuck a little on Kenny rogers The Gambler when i wrote this 😃

Lyrics doesnt follow all the way of course but then again Edison didnt create the lightbulb on his first try either .. =))

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On 2020-08-01 at 06:49 sa HomerJSimpsson:

Now how would that sound if someone sang it ? And what  melody would it fit ?

Is it ment to be a poem ?  If so, what is its rythem to be spoken ?

The refrain, it has a rythem, not shure about the rest.

Somebody sing it and put it to the test.

There might be melody, may good for a rap.

Whatever, I don't think it's crap.

Think there'are som spellings wrong.

But, hey, that's not my song.

I never learnd english, got it all from TV Simps.

I can make it sound ok, but I spell like Chimps.

Thats a text right there 😂

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1 timme sedan sa Nbient:

Thats a text right there 😂

All my texts are just like that,

it's hell putting music on my crap.

I know the The Gambler, that's really a well made song.

Heavy stuff for Atrax51 to take on.

I think he'll needs a band,

you know, some guys who can take a stand.

Knowing 'bout the old ways, while dealing the new.

He could be a part of that, maybe you to.

 

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